Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education but other people claim that it is the individual’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent decades, healthcare and education are attracting a great deal of public attention due to its substantial impacts on humankind’s development. Although the proposal of governmental responsibility for healthcare and education sounds reasonable, it think citizens should pay for these services.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the government should pay for healthcare and education. First, Thanks to the governmental financial benefits, Low-income individuals who can not afford the hospital expenses can have their serious diseases eradicated. For example those diagnosed with cancers or some chronic conditions could freely use surgical procedures and purchase prescription medicines without worrying about the money. Second, If the government pay for the tuition fees, Citizens in poverty-stricken areas could experience a more standardised and progressive learning environment. This would promote their employment prospects, which is an antidote to the unemployment problems.
On the other hand, Individuals should be liable for their healthcare and education. First, In some developing nations, hospitals’ facilities and practitioners’s medical skills do not satisfy the international requirements. This means that Individuals with crippling conditions should go abroad for a more advanced treatment and incur the hospital fees themselves, which could increase their survial rate.In condition, Independence from government would incentivise citizens to follow some privately-owed educational institutions. In fact these schools would teach a more empirical knowledge and equip students with practical academic skills than state-owned ones.
In conclusion, I believe that healthcare and education should be of individuals’ liability due to some broad-based benefits. The governments are highly-recommended to only upgrade the hospital’s facilities and improve the education systems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.36742424242 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.6049762025 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632575757576 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8693824215 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280359371391 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104788820247 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746198655895 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183954535052 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317152503904 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.67 12.4159519038 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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