Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after their children.
What do you think would be the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Children are valuable assets of their parents and taking care of them is their parents’ prime objective. However, costs related to living are so great that both parents choose to do jobs. To tackle the living costs and provide better care to children, some people argue that government should pay one of the parents and urge them to stay at home to nurture their children.
The prime advantage of this approach would be that the child can enjoy their parent’s care and supervision while growing. If the government will pay the parent who is staying home then it will help them to run the living costs while looking after their child. In addition, any child learns by emulating their elders and if they are under the care of their mom or dad all day, they will learn more effectively. After all, the parent is a role model for their child and it is their ethical duty to teach their child, the basic life skills. For Instance, UK government pays families child care assistance in terms of money.
On the contrary, this can lead to a few problems. By keeping children at home for care, parents will not send them to the pre-schools. As a consequence, children will not develop the social skills because they will not be mixing up with the other children of their age from different backgrounds. Also, the government will have to bear extra costs and it can impact the country’s economy. For instance, the American government is planning to cut off their costs of paying money to parents for the care of their child, because the American economy is facing a decline.
In conclusion, although the advantages of this approach outweigh the disadvantages, governments should make considerable approaches to assess whether this scheme impacts their economy or not and according to that, decide to apply it.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'after all', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253561253561 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.048433048433 0.0946595960268 51% => OK
Adverbs: 0.031339031339 0.0501214627716 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0712250712251 0.0437548338989 163% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11396011396 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.034188034188 0.0403226058552 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62079453522 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.045584045584 0.0326793684256 139% => OK
Particles: 0.00569800569801 0.00163938923432 348% => OK
Determiners: 0.0997150997151 0.0861772015684 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.037037037037 0.021408717616 173% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.002849002849 0.011925033212 24% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1821.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87419354839 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.312903225806 0.374742101984 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222580645161 0.28420135186 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158064516129 0.203846283523 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103225806452 0.137316102897 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62079453522 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525806451613 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.0109418501 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1428571429 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1749045518 49.517814964 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.071428571 127.492653851 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.814263465372 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 44.400921659 49.1944974215 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.56666666667 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507658215614 0.332605444948 153% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138698772555 0.102741220458 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0635859313286 0.0668466124924 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.597066617208 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163544451254 0.148594505496 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220679484989 0.134430193775 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977205905145 0.0742795772207 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.381222476219 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.088271561787 0.0638462369009 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361857133146 0.228012699653 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608651755438 0.058150111329 105% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.