Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security. But others believe that people cannot always enjoy their jobs and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
The idea of whether we should have ideal, dream jobs which enable us to satisfy with our occupations or purchase stable jobs remain a source of controversy. Some individuals claim that job satisfaction cannot be long-lasting and it is more essential to secure permanent jobs. In my opinion, the feeling of satisfaction and fulfillment in job is much more important.
On the one hand, it is unquestionable that having permanent jobs is very beneficial. Firstly, these jobs are conducive people to have a stable and carefree life since they have financial support. For example, with stable income monthly, urban dwellers can reckon on their expenses on domestic and social issues accurately which thereby is helpful for them. Secondly, since people do not have to care much about financial problems or job insecurity, they can enjoy life easily such as taking up new hobbies such as volleyball or golf. Also, people can utilize their spare time to enjoy their own interest. Apart from time spent at the office, a banker can also pursuit her own dream job as a gardener in her leisure time.
On the other hand, I believe that job satisfaction and fulfillment is much more significant for two reasons. First of all, provided interest, people can definitely devote their energy to what they are doing. By doing so, they are inclined to come up with new, creative and innovative ideas which consequently may greatly contribute to the growth of productivity and efficiency in their works. Another reason is that people who enthusiastically do their work can become a source of inspiration for others in their community. Take journalist as an example, it was once considered as a difficult work which required a great deal of hardships and intelligence but still an insecurity job since they could be dismissed easily due to its severe competitiveness. However, as time pass by, we can see a lot of famous journalists who performed successfully and inspired a lot of teenagers to pursuit this career.
In conclusion, it seems to me that although having permanent jobs is important, gaining satisfaction and fulfillment on what we are doing is worthier pursuing.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96041725674 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565826330532 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4004359126 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1875 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366269763015 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135079997493 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912732818862 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239822566588 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816064447096 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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