Some People Think That Strick Punishments For Driving Offences Are The Key To Reducing Traffic Accidents. Others, However, Believe That Other Measures Would Be More Effective In Improving Road Safety. Discuss Both Views And Give Your Own Opinion.
The severe penalties for people breaking the law in driving on road always provide a lot of benefits for road safety and besides, other measures also yield remarkable results.In my opinion, both of them also work together to keep safety.
On the one hand, the strick punishments force people to focus their attention to driving carefully, which helps them not be fined. Driving offences can be judged with many varied level of violation such as a fine, imprisonment or a driving ban. Someone doesn’t realize how dangerous the crashes will be when they happen to others who also present on the road. In this case, that may make drivers be aware of complying with the traffic regulations.
On the other hand, there are many ways to tackle problems of traffic as opposed to punishing severely. Firstly, government should pass a law requiring seriously progress in instruct somebody who want to get a driving licence. Secondly, most schools request students to attend lessons involved in traffic laws as a compulsory part. Finally, it is important to heighten rinhabitants’s awareness of driving safely due to the fact that a mistake can lead to the crashes or worse results.
In conclusion, keeping road safe is the responsibility of all citizens , not only drivers; so the combination of punishments and safety measures is much more beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14864864865 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91536386371 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657657657658 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6197068707 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.3 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24526310701 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820140516594 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512546048478 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135503863596 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498375174785 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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