Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some people work for the same organization all their working life maybe because there are people who are resistant to change. Others thinks that it is better to work for different organizations because some people thinks it is a growth for their career.
One reason I believe why there are people who work for the same organization all their life is they are resistant to change. There are people who are already contented in what they are currently doing and they think looking for another job is a new challenge for them because they have to work with different people again.Moreover, they also fear that they will be rejected by the people of the organization they will transfer. One good example is a regular employee who have been working in a certain company for a couple of years and have already established good relationship with his superior and co-employees. In addition, this person will most likely stay with the company because of the people around him that makes him or her comfortable with his or her job.
On the other hand, there are people who work for different organizations because they think it is a way for career growth. Some people do not stay in a company for a long period. After they have worked for a couple of years and already learned the job they tend to leave the company and look for another job which has a more duties and responsibilities. A good example of this is a general nurse who has been working in a hospital ward for some time, to increase the knowledge and skills, the nurse has the tendency to apply in a specialized are like the Intensive Care Unit to expose his or her self in a different setting that makes him or her more competent nurse.
In conclusion, it is better to work for different organizations to enhance one's capabilities and broaden the knowledge. It does not just make a person competent but a good prospect for employers too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ave to work with different people again.Moreover, they also fear that they will be rejec...
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Suggestion: the surrounding people
...likely stay with the company because of the people around him that makes him or her comfortable with ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... for different organizations to enhance ones capabilities and broaden the knowledge....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65773809524 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68981601414 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422619047619 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6598289862 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426660186794 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227353115905 0.084324248473 270% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160167847999 0.0667982634062 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.345313981995 0.151304729494 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156384134552 0.056905535591 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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