Studies show that many criminals have a low of education. For this reason, people that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can ge a job when leave prison. Do you agree or disagree
Research indicate that a lot of criminals derived from the bad educated class. Several people argue that the most effective solution to decline crime rate is to provide wrongdoers with a good education in jail and as a result, they will have countless opportunities for finding a suitable job to meet their basic needs after leaving prison. I partly agree with this view.
To begin with, implementing some education programs for criminals has some positive influences. First and foremost, education is a good way to provide some essential skills for offenders in order to seek a job for making a living in the life when being released back into society. For example, if offenders are taught some specific skills for careers such as tailoring or carpentry and so on, it will be easier for them to have a suitable job which brings them an income sourse.Therefore, they will have a chance of rehabilitation. In addition, it also helps criminals aware of the value of themselves. The fact shows that if offenders realize that they are still appreciated in society, they will fell more confident on themselves and make an effort to become an useful member in community.
However, there are some other methods to decrease the level of crime besides running education campaigns for prisoners. Firstly, the governments should impose different punishments depending on the level dangerous of crime. For instance, in terms of serious crime, serving a long prison sentence will act as a deterrent and threat of wrongdoers to avoid re-offending. Moreover, education should be provided for the young in initial stage rather than when they are put in jail. Due to the fact that children are not enough mature and they likely have tendency to imitate bad behaviour, they will broke the law without their parents' observation. Giving youngsters knowledge originally to understand whether what they do is legal or illegal is better method instead waiting till they commit a crime.
In conclusion, although there are a total of advantages which educating prisoners brings for reducing crime, I strongly believe that it is not the best solution, hence, the government should enact some other measures such as stricter punishments to deter an increase in crime rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79891619908 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3552614271 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.733333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297211139616 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892542101754 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429535481067 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17604517807 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338769879862 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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