These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits of doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
People have different views about the impact of moving overseas. While I agree with the idea of living abroad can bring a wide range of advantages, I do believe that the drawbacks will outweigh its benefits.
On the one hand, when heading overseas, there is a rich variety of considerable advantages. One benefit is that this will be ample scope to broaden horizons by means of meeting people from vastly different cultural backgrounds such as some cosmopolitan cities like London, New York, Tokyo,... Therefore, people, especially young adults will obtain such many valuable experiences by learning to cope with foreign customs, which will lead to being a rounded person. Another perk is that individuals are likely to receive a decent education and a host of superior living conditions. For example, thousands of job seekers from developing countries move to Japan, this is attributed to its highly senior citizens. As a result, heading overseas absolutely do wonders for finding a higher quality of life and widened their views to the outside world.
On the other hand, regardless of an abundance of advantages, the drawbacks are inevitable. Firstly, most of the overseas students are exposed to culture shock more often than not. For instance, the language barrier is still preventing them from making acquaintance with new peers and finding community. Consequently, it will make up a lot of time for them to make accustomed to those new experiences. Secondly, living alone as well as managing their finance independently is often an obstacle for young adults because the living cost in some developed countries is prohibitively expensive. Hence, paying the bills or coping with loneliness and new cultures usually challenge them.
In conclusion, while there is a range of great chances for people who are in search of a better living condition in other countries, I strongly place emphasize on its detrimental effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23548387097 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86525164925 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622580645161 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1233375213 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202659181657 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563157667007 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364609304746 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117365541427 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00859949636677 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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