These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
A question many of us have to ask yourself whether the discrepancy between father and mother roles in ranging from work to family. I am inclined to believe that for the time being, father still needs to satisfy himself for the sacks of his own family members. Hardly can we deny that in the 21 century, women are acquired their rights in order to be equal as men, which they have never had before except raising their children.
To assess this prevailing trend, we must bring the advantages of letting a father take their responsibilities as their ancestors have done. Assuming when a man went to work on a daily basis, a woman would have a lot of free time for her children and get stuff off her chest through calling to friendships without being exhausted to solve working problematic issues. In fact, there are tons of thousands of leisure indoor activities which will help her relax after doing house chores such as playing online games, singing a favourite song or even reading a comedy novel. Not only can she make good traditional dishes for herself or family, but she can also teach her child to learn a new language that no mother who is stuck with business things can do. In addition, it has become too tricky for everyone, especially a father, to play a crucial role in motherhood.
Although so far, one can readily draw the conclusion that a father has more great chances to get a well-paid job instead of a mother, we must put the advantages of a mother chasing after her dream career into perspective before judging whether it is necessary or not. There are many troublesome phrases in a successful working path that a man has to go through but a woman does not have to in life such as persuading her partners or colleagues to cooperate without sweating. For instance, many women have never struggled to get her boss' trust or approval and made tremendous progress in the workplace. On top of that, there are learning opportunities as well as opportunities to do more networking for the women. So many doors are opened and many links are established when you are born as a female.
Taking both sides into consideration, they point me to the conclusion that this phenomenon has recently gained much attention from the social society and let us know women have their rights to go to work as men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66259168704 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6094560858 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586797066015 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1295373716 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.214285714 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2142857143 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195678749835 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658713614651 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295938351405 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120336516134 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195744027159 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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