Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally agreed today that we all are surrounded by slogans, billboards, commercials, pamphlets and radio announcements. As a result, most people claim that, they often bought products which they do not really need, while others believe that they are not being influenced as consumers. Both the advantages and disadvantages of this issue will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is reached.

On the one hand, advertising companies have specialists who do research on people psychology which boosts the sales of goods. It is a fact that, we all have idols who inspires us thus we want to...

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Sentence: On the one hand, advertising companies have specialists who do research on people psychology which boosts the sales of goods.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and psychology

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