Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and real needs of the society in which they are sold.
Agree
Advertisements play an important role in sales of different products. A product worth is multiplied not just because of its need but the way it is advertised, adds to its demand.
Advertisement industry is now worth billions worldwide. It has spread because of the shear hard work in observing the social trends and studying micro economics. For instance, the target consumer is followed for months in order to find out how a product should be displayed on billboards, tv ads etc.
Revenues are not the only end product of many advertisements. They give consumers a variety of a specific product. Sometimes there's a social message at the end tv ads. for example now a days they tell people not waste food.
On one hand advertising agencies are helpful and healthy. But sometimes they are also manipulating their consumers into buying products they don't need. For example, if a watch is showed off by a famous celebrity for a few seconds, some people get an urge to buy that exact watch. They don't realize if they really need it. Most of the times they end up buying it only because a famous person is endorsing it. The celebrity himself will never wear it in real life.
In conclusion i partly agree with the question, demand and actual need of the product has to be there in order to sell an item. Some of the products are sold because of better advertisement but these type of examples are less.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244444444444 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.177777777778 0.155533422707 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0814814814815 0.0946595960268 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.0501214627716 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.062962962963 0.0437548338989 144% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.125925925926 0.122226691241 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0481481481481 0.0403226058552 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69851344088 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0185185185185 0.0326793684256 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0111111111111 0.00163938923432 678% => OK
Determiners: 0.1 0.0861772015684 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00740740740741 0.021408717616 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0037037037037 0.011925033212 31% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1435.0 1933.35771543 74% => OK
No of words: 247.0 316.048096192 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80971659919 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315789473684 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226720647773 0.28420135186 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165991902834 0.203846283523 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105263157895 0.137316102897 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69851344088 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599190283401 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 61.9774139792 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.5294117647 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4070425279 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4117647059 127.492653851 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.99599198397 250% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.201476542 49.1944974215 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.4125 1.69124875643 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390585124845 0.332605444948 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0667398283065 0.102741220458 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0621578193566 0.0668466124924 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.4824383133 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145242577714 0.148594505496 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133470044986 0.134430193775 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944291102979 0.0742795772207 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.196794693787 0.324371583561 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0172643565319 0.0638462369009 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244866771856 0.228012699653 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826298467803 0.058150111329 142% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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