Topic: in about 250-word essay expressing your opinion about the following topic:
“Technology has made the world a better place to live.”
You should use facts, examples, or logical reasons to support your opinion. Write it in about 40 minutes
The twentieth century experienced the technological revolution. Undeniably, technology has changed our lives dramatically. In my opinion, Technology has made the world more and more developed, in the most positive direction.
Firstly, the advent of computers and the Internet has exploded the information age. People can connect with many people each other all over the world by many ways: Mail, Facebook and Skype.
Furthermore, with the development of technology, the machinery is programmed and completely automated. For instance, goods are mass produced with high-precision, factories are controlled and operated by computer or exploration the universe by spacecraft .
Besides, technological advances have benefited our life with significant medical improvement. Heart now can successfully be transplanted into patients with specialized equipment. Many people suffering from diseases and illnesses have a higher chance of surviving.
However, opponents of this view say that technology has not made the world a better. They point out that artificial intelligence and machine will affect employment. Besides, they suppose that the environmental pollution is due to the impact of technology. To a certain extent, this is partly true. However, this tidy energy argument is unreasonable because human resources are irreplaceable with new discoveries in technology, many new jobs is being created. Moreover, sources of alternative energy can solve environmental problems such as solar energy, wind energy or tidal energy.
In conclusion, most of these changes contribute to making our life more convenient, comfortable and wonderful. Therefore, I am of the opinion that technology has totally improved our lives, as long as we can apply the technology in appropriate uses and reduce any existing disadvantages.
Comments
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This essay topic is for task II, not for task I.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80524344569 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25055472758 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647940074906 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.149995933 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1111111111 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811592404199 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025585918905 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401853523086 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422876876351 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435477679734 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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