As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that companies should be responsible for social problems beside focusing on making profit. In my opinion, while making money is the top priority of the companies, I totally agree that they should have actions for the sake of the society.
On the one hand,making profit is important to some extent. Firstly, since enterprises work effectively, they are able to pay more taxes such as stamp duties or income tax. These amount of money are useful for the government to clear up social problems in terms of health, education, and transportation. Secondly, the higher profit the company makes, the more jobs it creates. Making more profits means that the company carry on business effectively. As a result, the demand of labors in the company increases, bringing more jobs the community.
On the other hand, apart from the practical benefits mentioned above, I believe that enterprises should be in charged of social issues. In the present times, enterprises are making the most of the environment and the eco system is being destroyed severely by the action of human beings, especially by companies. Therefore, companies should carry on planning to peotect the environment. For example, in stead of discharging chemical waste into rivers, factories should installl waste treatment systems. Secondly, businesses should spend money on charity or scholarship. If they create charity or scholarship fund, they can help the poor turn to new page in life.
In conclusion, although making money is important to companies, I agree that companies should be responsible for social problems as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24124513619 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83315513263 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0766114078 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170177399993 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593236444141 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709052116666 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135479043739 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713189558323 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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