As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that together with making profits, companies also need to have puclic reponsibilities. In my opinion, while generating profit is the top priority of each company, I agree that they should conduct their business their business in a socially responsible manner.
On the one hand, the effort to maximize profits may be beneficial in some ways. Firstly, the higher profits the companies make, the more taxes they are able to pay. For example, taxes such as stamp duties or income tax are useful for the government to clear up social issues in terms of education or health care. Secondly, by earning huge profits, enterprises are likely to reinvest in their business and enlagre the business scale. For instance, firm could use money generating from carrying on business effectively to expand their production system as well as R&D department to enhance the quality of goods.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why business should make themselves be in charged of social issues. The first reason is that, companies’ activities cause a great deal of harm to the environment. Without controls, these activities may result in serious environment degredation, such as global warming and greenhouse effect causing from factory emission. As a result, enterprises should make plans to protect the environment. For example, instead of discharging chemical waste into rivers, factories should installl waste treatment systems. Secondly, enterprises should spend money raising a charity or scholarship fund to support people who are under the standard living conditions in order to help them turn to a new page in life. For instance, companies ought to raise a charity fund supporting the poor people in terms of food and other living conditions; while for the youngsters, businesses can donate money to scholarship to send them studying abroad.
In conclusion, although making money is important to companies, I agree that companies should be responsible for social problems as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: their business
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86064154425 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588050314465 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7454251576 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218031714132 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719906447792 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667465049658 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163383608385 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606943895836 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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