as well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. do you agree or disagree?
Not only one have I learned the topic of the responsibility of business when I turned on television or flicked through the pages of newspaper over the past few months. Whether besides making money, enterprises need to have public responsibility can be a matter of considerable debate. I completely agree with this point of view and in this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.
On the one hand, generating profit which is the top priority for each company bring about some advantages for society. Firstly, business has to pay taxes for government in order to spend in a key field, including medical services or education. Secondly, by earning huge profits, they have an opportunity to grow their business. As a result, companies create more job opportunities within the community.
On the other hand, there are some strong reasons why enterprises have to responsible for society. The first reason is that companies, as well as authorities, can protect the environment. Instead of environmental degradation, they can take action on global warming or stop discharging chemical waste. By doing this, it is true that environmental problems are alleviated. Another reason is that enterprises should help those who are in poverty because they have money to do so. For example, some big corporations such as Vinamilk or Uliverse enhance their public image through philanthropic actions such as financing allocation for unfortunate people or providing the scholarships.
In conclusion, although I recognize that making profits is the fundamental principle of business, I would argue that all business should profoundly reflect upon their social responsibility
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3893129771 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12368613485 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656488549618 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5758120316 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171504152579 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526419696782 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450383395675 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962623111544 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361949661667 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.