As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
In competitive word, businesses always place profit is the first priority beside other concerns. In my opinion, I agree with this view but I think companies need pay more attention to society than just run with sole aim is money.
On the one hand, I admit that benefit with company is fundamental principle. Firstly, If companies can not make profit, they will not be able to pay cost for employee’s wages, building hiring, and others utilities. By contrast, when company in a good financial health, they also can invest in improving machines, material facilities so as to bring more services or products for customers. Secondly, if businesses can not meet the changing needs of customers and pay its bills, they will not put any regard to social responsibilities.
On the other hand, enterprises should not run with the only aim is maximise profit. They should also accept response with society. First of all, enterprises’s activities have an effect on environment so it is necessary to control waste discharge into the earth. For example, corporation and firm may installed waste treatment systems instead of disposing waste into the environment directly. Besides, bussinesses also enhanced public image through some activities like examples, giving charitable donations, supporting environment project and other activities. In addition, businesses pay tax fully through tax system also contributing activity for community.
In conclusion, financial objectives is always necessary for businesses but they should be aware of responsibility to community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...improving machines, material facilities so as to bring more services or products for cus...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maximised'.
Suggestion: maximised
...ses should not run with the only aim is maximise profit. They should also accept respons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53941908714 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14132274852 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643153526971 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6302510923 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0769230769 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130529895566 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426101471229 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326453480438 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715092017848 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178725224473 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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