What are the key problems facing the world’s cities in the 21st century, and what can be done about them?
In many cosmopolitan cities, the dwellers have t struggle with the lack of accommodation. There are some factors causing this issue. Therefore, it should be tackled by some effective measures.
Among many reasons leading to this problem, I suppose that the two major ones are urbanization and economic recession. Fist of all, these days, that people from the countryside and the less developed areas migrate to the big cities is an inevitable trend as everyone has a great desire to get a better education and more rewarding jobs. This put great pressure on the executive bodies in dealing with the house supply for these newcomers as the land area for construction in some cities is limited. Furthermore, because of the economic recession, the construction industry becomes stagnant. There are not many projects carried out as before due to the limited budget invested for the field of construction. In addition, in this difficult context of economy, those who have not settled down in jobs tend to tighten their belts, so they hardly spend on housing whose price is enormous.
However, in my opinion, this problem is not unsolvable as it can be measured by some proper solutions. Firstly, Governments are supposed to equally foster the economic progress around the country, especially in the rural and remote areas. Schools and universities, for instance, should be built more and the quality of education should be significantly improved to attract the local students so that they do not need to travel further for education. On top of this, the competent authorities also need to consider planning more economic projects in these regions in order to create more jobs for the local residents. As a result, they can totally earn a living at their own hometown instead of seeking jobs in the urban areas. The other remedies can be applied is that Governments should extract more budget to encourage the field of construction real estate so that there are more houses can be built. Simultaneously, The State Planners should stimulate the purchase of the citizens by supporting them in the term of finance such as credit loan. Consequently, the construction companies and house businessmen can meet the demand of their customers.
In conclusion, that the shortage of houses in the high developed cities is a big challenge for the Governments and residents there. Thus it should be solved the sooner the better. From my aforementioned suggestions, I hope this serious issue can be greatly dealt with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08759124088 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86679548414 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552311435523 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3793344311 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.55 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.55 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107478268707 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338265230662 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337862971199 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655291884266 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361295368925 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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