You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Sporting events are organized by different nations of the world for the past few decades. Although many people believe that the chance of hosting such programs is beneficial for their country, others stand on for opposite view. In my opinion, I consider, while arranging such events can have some challenges of its own, the overall effects of becoming a host are way more.
On the one hand, hosting international sports events have some challenges for any nation of the world. First of all, they may need a decent place with a considerable size of playground for the sports along with surrounding hotels and restaurants for the foreign visitors which they may not have ready. Therefore, to keep the venue all ready, there may be replacements or demolition of existing infrastructures. Additionally, the country has to decorate and spend more money to maintain and keep well organised the place. Some countries even do not play that specific sport. Hence, along with the cost, they may not find any interest in the event. For these reasons, some people think that these sports events are bad both for their culture and country.
On the other hand, organizing such international sporting events can have many positive effects for the hosting country and I agree with this side of thought. This is because as these types of events occur all around the world, it gives the hosting country the opportunity to represent its culture. It gives a sense of recognition to the organizer to the rest of the world. Moreover, the cost of maintenance mostly comes from different famous sponsoring companies all over the world, and this way it is not such a financial burden of the native country. Last but not the least, the huge amount of visitors spend lots of money on entry fees, hotels, and tourism of the country which also can be a great of generating revenue.
In conclusion, although people may have a different perspective on organizing international sports events in their homeland. I believe they are beneficial for any country who decides to arrange them as the rest of the world know about their heritage and also it can act as a source of income.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90710382514 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66561387442 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502732240437 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.098235773 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.647058824 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261502666275 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896448369224 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668030148946 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161626038158 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341203460962 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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