Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argue that the consumer’s lifestyle and outfit fashion is manipulated by advertising which deter them from living with personality. I completely agree that statement because marketing of products could grow customer’s similar enthusiasm to use and pursue the branded fashion leads them to remain unchanged.
On the one Hand, advertisement has a great impact on customer interest. By dint of advertising customer in all groups get information about the products which they need in their comfortable daily life, and it could influence them to make pre-purchase judgement. The content of item could be varied for individual economical conditions, but the idea of product remains stable. For instance, if a person eager to buy a Smartphone after watching the I-PHONE features marketing, then the price of phone might be changed his/her choice of manufacturer but the core inspiration of using Smartphone seems to be parallel. However, advertisement not only brings the options for purchaser but also user’s shopping perspective.
On the other hand, in general people are more likely believe on international and national brand material for their fashion outfit. All companies have own unique design policy which means that common customer who will pick their products will have a tiny distinction one to other appearance. For example, after worn the attire of vogue or Armani, user outlook will ordinary for similar brand. Moreover, most advertising models are celebrity, and consumer love to resemble a famous person. As a result, fashion becomes more frequent in consumers to appear an icon-look.
In conclusion, I agree with opinion that advertisement dispels personal thought by persuading them to exploit homogenous item in daily life and trend, because it could trigger of the customer selection and remain identical in self furnish.

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Average: 6.7 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: economic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46527777778 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01320876863 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631944444444 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6864665106 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994576641677 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359285200804 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0171624885281 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574487390439 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217368703928 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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