In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
As for me, I don't think it is right. Families should take care of their relatives by themselves. When you leave your old mother or father in a Nursing House, it becomes crucial moment in their psyche. They think that they are not needed to their children anymore. As researches show, most of elder generation do think their children abandoned them. That is why a family has to pay for them because often it is the families' choice to bring to bring grandparents to the Home for the elderly.
But what about those who have no family due to the fact of losing their's by accident or abandoning by children? Should they live on the street? Should they eat leftovers? I think that is the case the government must care of! If a person is not able to work or is old enough, the government must pay for their residence in a Nursing Home. As a matter of fact, the government of every country gets dues from those who work. For example, in Ukraine it is called the Pension Fund, where pensioners can get their monthly penny for their lenghth of working officially. The more you work, the bigger pension you have. Personally, I know not much about the Nursing Homes of Britain. Maybe it is better than those in Ukraine. One I know for sure: if I died in my oldness, I wouldn't die in any of those Nursing Homes! I would probably die in a wheelchair with golden wheels (kind of those in cars from Subaru), covered by plaid, smoking marijuana with a wide smile on my face. And all this would happen at my villa somewhere on Cuba.
To sum up, I think that it is wrong when adults bring their old parents to the place they don't want to live in. I agree that it is kind of a nice place, where there is entertainment only, no housework and a lot of people of your age. As for the topic, in my opinion, the government ought to pay for pld folk, who have no families. Nobody would care of them except of the country they have been working till the could. And for the old with families, their relatives should pay off their abode in the Home for the elderly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
As for me, I dont think it is right. Families should take...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to bring'.
Suggestion: to bring
...because often it is the families choice to bring to bring grandparents to the Home for the elderl...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...ow for sure: if I died in my oldness, I wouldnt die in any of those Nursing Homes! I wo...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'wheels'' or 'wheel's'?
Suggestion: wheels'; wheel's
...robably die in a wheelchair with golden wheels kind of those in cars from Subaru, cove...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ing their old parents to the place they dont want to live in. I agree that it is kin...
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Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...ont want to live in. I agree that it is kind of a nice place, where there is entertainmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, as for, as to, for example, i think, kind of, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31510416667 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30813066715 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502604166667 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4738087715 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3181818182 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95454545455 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400322464838 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109908049495 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696370754408 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286465789931 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012947307687 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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