In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
The advancement in medical technology has extensively prolonged human life. As the average life expectancy increases, so do the associated problem growth. Although these problems do not existed before, they are surmountable.
The first and foremost issue introduced is that extra resources are needed to allocate to this ageing population. Not surprisingly, healthcare system, housing and transportation are all needed to enhance to cater their distinct needs. These additional resources will become extra burden on government, inevitably resulting to tax added on working class individuals. Secondly, some elderly whose spouse has been passed away may feel lonely, leading to anxiety and depression. As these two social issues hinder our society from moving forward, we must address them accordingly.
There are multifarious solutions to these problems. Primarily, governments can postpone the retirement age of these peoples, this allows them to not only contribute society continuously, but also generate the revenue to government. Looking back the reason why the life expectancy is increasing, the medical advancement has evolved to such a degree that the elderly are healthier than before. Their health condition are good enough to continue working. Moreover, governments should work with local community to organize some activities to elderly. For example, the local schools can invite the elderly to give a talk about their past story to the school children. This can benefit both the school children and the elderly as the children can learn their valuable experience while the elderly can fuse with the society again.
Admittedly, this ageing group does create problems which do not exist before. However, these seemingly insurmountable problems actually can be tackled by the joint effort of both governments and public. In my opinion, elderly process an irreplaceable experience and it can definitely benefit all of us.
Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201219512195 0.247107183377 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.17987804878 0.155533422707 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0914634146341 0.0946595960268 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0792682926829 0.0501214627716 158% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0365853658537 0.0437548338989 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0701219512195 0.122226691241 57% => OK
Participles: 0.0609756097561 0.0403226058552 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91715251532 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0457317073171 0.0326793684256 140% => OK
Particles: 0.0030487804878 0.00163938923432 186% => OK
Determiners: 0.115853658537 0.0861772015684 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0335365853659 0.021408717616 157% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00914634146341 0.011925033212 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1934.0 1933.35771543 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.60068259386 6.12580529183 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.450511945392 0.374742101984 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.365187713311 0.28420135186 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.245733788396 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.170648464164 0.137316102897 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91715251532 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641638225256 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 75.5160754827 60.7387585426 124% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.2777777778 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7225333319 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.444444444 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.814263465372 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 52.7965491088 49.1944974215 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.12371134021 1.69124875643 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35095630277 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0960625836662 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100103876638 0.0668466124924 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.479820658623 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140916701095 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113230213736 0.134430193775 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694874917828 0.0742795772207 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.194279074495 0.324371583561 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0938354368575 0.0638462369009 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207618882181 0.228012699653 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489388264341 0.058150111329 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.