Developments of technology are causing environmental problems. Some people think the solution is that everyone should accept a simpler life, while other believe that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both view and give your opinion

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Developments of technology are causing environmental problems. Some people think the solution is that everyone should accept a simpler life, while other believe that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both view and give your opinion

The negative impact on environment caused by new forms of technology are becoming more serious. Although some people think that becoming less dependent on technology and living a simple life is only solution. In my opinion, I believe that there are innovations that could address those environmental issues.
On the one hand, the use of fossil fuels in industry, agriculture and other human activities is a cause of the dramatically increase of the total amount of carbon dioxide in atmosphere which is the culprit of various negative consequence such as global warming and the enhanced greenhouse effect (greenhouse effect is a natural phenomenon); even the most uninformed people could realize that. A typical example of this perception is the Earth Hour campaign, which is a symbolic action to encourage individuals, organizations and communities to turn off the electrical lights for one hour and raise awareness of society about saving energy and reducing the environmental issues caused by the electrical devices.
On the other hand, the innovations in technology in the last decade have contributed to environmental protection. First, to cut carbon emissions, scientists have invented various products which are eco- friendly such as the electric car. Second, many new inventions and discoveries in technology are used to create new materials and solutions to alleviate plastic pollution which is a big burden on the ecosystems, nowadays. A concrete example is a new discovery of an enzyme in body structure of a worm. This worm can digest plastic, using it for food. Breeding this worm for use garbage processing will prevent over 5 billion tons of unrecyclable plastic from polluting the environment.
Taking all of this into account, the simpler life is not the unique choice to prevent the environmental issues because the advances in technology in the future could tackle these problems.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...such as global warming and the enhanced greenhouse effect greenhouse effect is a natural phenomenon; even the most ...
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...ssues caused by the electrical devices. On the other hand, the innovations in te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32890365449 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00756763421 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.8791844974 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203878698097 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07341908867 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625429062362 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134998279089 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708816812479 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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