Dietary experts agree that many people have unhealthy diet. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
The unhealthy diet is a problem that has rapidly increased over the past few decades. It can be seen in almost every country and affects millions of people. The results of this are obesity, corresponding diseases and in the most extreme cases, death.
Several factors are at the root of the diet issue. The primary reason for this is that junk food is very cheap. Organic food such as milk from the countryside, for instance, costs at least twice expensive than the chemical one. Another reason is that aggressive adverts of hamburgers and coca-cola surround us. We can see it on the Internet, on TV, and even on the streets on billboards. Also, there is one more factor - the lack of physical activity. In today’s world, people tend to sit in front of TV eating chips and thus they become ill.
I firmly believe that the solution begins with government steps and it should regulate prices on food in order to lower them on the healthy one. This will give people the opportunity to choose what to buy and will help not to economize on their own health. In addition, the government should impose laws that decrease the number of fast food adverts. Not only would this be extremely helpful for adults, but this would also contribute to bringing up a healthy generation of our children. Furthermore, with decreasing of junk food advertising, the government should promote adverts as to why physical exercises such as fitness are utterly important.
Having said that, unhealthy diet has no easy solution but I do believe that it is not the one that can not be overcome. Regulations of prices on food is where the process begins. If we do one day solve this problem, then there is no doubt that not only will people be healthier, but also they will be happier.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, as to, at least, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72491909385 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55547401681 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2872000807 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1111111111 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151638277851 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426987832904 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501099915967 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914089095719 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366056553102 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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