Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Young people are considered future of nation and it is expected to have strong connection with community. Nowadays, young generation hardly spend time with society and involved more in their activities. There are various reasons for this disconnection with friends, neighbors and inability to help community as well.
The main reason for not spending enough time is mobile and internet. It can be seen that every youth possess mobile and most of the time, they either communicate with loves ones or playing game resulting less time available for serving the needy people other than family and friends. Furthermore, internet technology has opened the gateway for not only the source of information but also one can do their important tasks using internet. For instance, people can do the bank transactions or complete the homework by accessing internet through mobile devices like mobile phone, tab etc.
Another important reason for lack of time availability is entertainment on T.V. Since the broadsiding of various channels, youth spend significant time to watch their favorite program and even in case of missing the program, facility to records the program are used and watched later on. As a result, they do not get any opportunity to participate in current social causes.
Finally, the increasing competition in education keeps the teenagers busy in achieving the goals. For last one decade, education has become paramount priority for both parents and kids and parents do not also motivate their kids to take part in community services. For example, my nephew prefers to focus on study and attend coaching rather than assist in philanthropic work.
To conclude, though community service essential to know about various facts of society and country native environment, youth nowadays rarely seen to work for community and understand the need of social groups and clearly use of mobile phone, entertainment and education etc… engross them in themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32475884244 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74323077438 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614147909968 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5975369201 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.384615385 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19308688783 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071967689846 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390431108751 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102602199714 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575559495169 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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