Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Information about employee is always necessary for the person who is offering jobs but which type of personal info will be given that is a matter of debate. Knowing favorite pastime or marital status is helpful to allot tasks while most of the time it is needless as most of the tasks are not dependent on these information. In my opinion, mentioning statistics is necessary which are directly relevant for the job.
Primarily, recruiters in their job advertisement mention some points that should mentioned in the job application. For example, education qualification, work experience, achievements etc. are important to asses a person and these data are necessary for a CV that will be dropped for particular job. Nowadays, for the application, summary of candidates is asked where specific requirements are mentioned. All these systems are good as these help to save time.
On the other hand, some job advertisers do not like to give any format for their job application. Not only that some they ask for irrelevant data, that are not connected with task pattern. So, when a candidate wants to apply for these job, they like to mention every facts. For example, for the entry post of a job it is very natural that an applicant wants to give more material as they do not know which info is needed.
Furthermore, it is very clear that if the employers want, they can reduce the dilemma about information. But for some jobs, it is important to know about marital status. For example, in military service it is important to be single for long course military training. Besides, tours and travel companies are always asked for hobbies and interests, as they are directly related with jobs.
In conclusion, it is always essential for the employers to ask for relevant information from job applicants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... most of the tasks are not dependent on these information. In my opinion, mentioning statistics i...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they do not know which info is needed. Furthermore, it is very clear that if th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95709570957 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81259384514 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521452145215 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.629313083 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3529411765 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328792105259 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118672285554 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060206358863 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209406384735 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400120250614 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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