Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Legacy and inheritance are commonly passed to future generation in order to revive the culture, traditions, jobs etc…Following this, while some people believe that children should follow the job of their parents and adopt the similar profession in their life, other disagree. I believe that children should choose their profession as what they like. I shall explain why I think like this.
People who believe that children should select the job related to their parent’s job have some valid points. Firstly, it is universally truth that parents are the best choice for any kind of learning if they can teach to their kids. There is natural bonding exists between children and parents which makes the learning easy and communication gap is also reduced up-to some extent. Secondly, parents go through different phases of life and acquire the skills while working in their profession. Individual may get the knowledge from books but for experience, one has to work in different condition and acquire the detailed working knowledge. Valuable experience may be passed to next generation and will be of great help to face the challenges. For example, my friend who has become highly proficient doctor by studying the medicine and get valuable tricks from his father.
However, this is also true that everyone has different choices and skills so it is basic right of person to select the job which he or she likes. It is quite often seen that parents and children has completely different interests and if children are forced to adopt the work which they dislike, it may be catastrophic for the future. Furthermore, skills levels are very crucial in executing the work and wide gap in skill level may cause serious consequences in performing the work. For instance, Rohan Gavakser, a son of legend batsman had to switch to different profession owing to less proficiency in cricket.
To conclude, though adopting the same profession like parents help the children to learn fast and acquire experience without actually going through these, children should be given the choice to select the area of work as per their interest and comfort level.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Following
...evive the culture, traditions, jobs etc…Following this, while some people believe that ch...
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Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...like parents help the children to learn fast and acquire experience without actually...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10227272727 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64025476951 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7189714878 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.733333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284746038073 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929594223732 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891464267165 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171338013826 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742396031759 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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