Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.What causes of the increased demand, and what measures can governments and individuals take to respond to thi

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Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.

What causes of the increased demand, and what measures can governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?

There has always been a lack of freshwater in some areas of the world. Undoubtedly, dramatically increased demand has made this an international issue. Nonetheless, accurate measures by governments and people could solve the problem.

There are ample of reasons behind the growing demand for the water. The main cause for this is, unstoppable growth in population. Today, there are 7.5 billion people are living on the earth. Although, earth is comprising 70% water and 30% land, only 2%of 70% is mineral water. And, that is why there is a scarcity of water in most of the areas of the planet. What is more, in day to day life of a human being we use a lot of water. In Australia, Melbourne, average usage of water per household is 250 liters per day, for example, surveyed by government authority. Besides, another cause is intense use of water in growing industries. As per united nations data, in industrialized nations industries consume more than half of the water available for human use.

To tackle this crisis governments and people should take required actions. Governments ought to impose high tariff on the industries for the excess usage of water. Moreover, similar to Singapore government every government could give incentives and grants who would hit the acceptable usage of water, consequently, it will encourage people to use water carefully. Whereas on in individual basis person must use water carefully, otherwise next generation will be at disadvantage soon.

To conclude, it is apparent that there are many factors which increases the demand of water, but also there are plenty of solutions to tackle this problem. I believe this measures will work in favor of mankind to conserve and save water.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, whereas, for example, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0701754386 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78332987764 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1923871676 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2777777778 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18789422053 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687756014431 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595013804098 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147387040156 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947741142278 0.056905535591 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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