Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What other measures do you this might be effective?

Essay topics:

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you this might be effective?

In today’s world, man’s overreliance on private cars has escalated the problems of pollution and traffic congestion. However, it is commonly believed that to tackle such challenges increasing the prices of fossil fuels is the optimum approach. I agree with the view in some circumstances, but other steps can also reverse the situation.

It is reasonable to consider that a surge in the prices of petrol could play a significant role in reducing pollution and improving traffic. First of all, it can effectively minimize people’s reliance on cars and encourage more individuals to take public transports. As a result, the number of vehicles running on the roads will be substantially lowered, thereby reducing the amount of car exhaust. In addition, this approach could also increase the popularity of active travel, such as walking and cycling, which is also consistent with the universal principle of promoting environmentally-friendly transport modes.

On the other hand, it is worth mentioning that other approaches could also help with addressing the issues. Firstly, the government ought to divert more public funds to the development of renewable resources, including solar and geothermal energy, which contributes to the preservation of the environment as well as sustainable development. Secondly, more railways should be constructed to enhance municipal metro systems, as it provides inhabitants with more convenient ways to reach destinations, thereby also rekindling a growing number of individuals’ enthusiasm to utilize public transport.

To conclude with my opinion, it is unquestionable that increasing the prices of petrol can mitigate the problems of air pollution and traffic jams, as it drastically reduces people’s reliance on car usage. However, other measures also ease the problems, and these include developing renewable resources and building more railways.

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Average: 5.8 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76056338028 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40893809808 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1191009797 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143051919769 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535958204155 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309981107655 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941404977204 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286073851447 0.056905535591 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Sentence: In today's world, man's overreliance on private cars has escalated the problems of pollution and traffic congestion.
Error: overreliance Suggestion: No alternate word

flaws:
three main issues:
1. same sentence structures are repeated all the way. look:

As a result, the number of vehicles running on the roads will be substantially lowered, thereby reducing the amount of car exhaust.

In addition, this approach could also increase the popularity of active travel, such as walking and cycling, which is also consistent with the universal principle of promoting environmentally-friendly transport modes.

the government ought to divert more public funds to the development of renewable resources, including solar and geothermal energy, which contributes to the preservation of the environment as well as sustainable development.

Secondly, more railways should be constructed to enhance municipal metro systems, as it provides inhabitants with more convenient ways to reach destinations, thereby also rekindling a growing number of individuals’ enthusiasm to utilize public transport.

2. same words are repeated too. like:
'approach', 'reliance'

3. some pattern sentences, like:

it is commonly believed that
It is reasonable to consider that
it is worth mentioning that
it is unquestionable that
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 284 350
No. of Characters: 1564 1500
No. of Different Words: 162 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.507 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.195 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.835 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.579 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.023 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5