It is important to construct common areas such as parks, playgrounds and squares in all towns and cities. Do you agree or disagree?
Public places such as parks and common squares are a kind of pleasure-space where the urban people sit and enjoy. I completely agree that more of such spaces should be built in cities.
Towns and cities do not have a lot of the green beauty and open fields found in the countryside. Instead, with growing modernization, the cities are getting filled up with din and dust and smoke, making people feel suffocated in this heavy atmosphere. They wish to enjoy the serenity of rural scenes which are not available in cities and towns, which is why many people build farm-houses and holiday homes away from the city for a weekend of peaceful and green atmosphere. A public park or a playground provides a taste of that to these busy people during their leisure-hours. Here they find a wealth of oxygen which is rare in other parts of the town, and families can have exciting picnics together and indulge in recreational activities like playing the frisbee, or taking their dog for a run.
A town square is commonly found in the heart of a traditional town used for community gatherings. They may house open markets, music concerts, bakeries and have a beautiful centre containing a fountain, or a statue. In most countries, automobiles are prohibited in these areas enabling people to walk around and eliminating the noise and pollution. People can gather here on weekends and have a fun outing for several hours for minimal costs since it’s freely accessible to all public. Such public squares, or civic centers encourage a sense of community and bond the society in harmony.
Due to the aforementioned reasons, it is necessary to build such community places in towns and cities. I feel they are necessary for the health and happiness of the town-dwellers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, i feel, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90969899666 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79027997749 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6007801707 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172393683692 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634994250666 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572567623913 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116624217008 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466373163948 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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