In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
In modern society, human’s living standard has been rapidly enhanced due to a variety of life-altering benefits brought by contemporary technology. However, a surge in crime rate also indicates that our society is losing its moral compass and this pressing problem ought to be addressed as soon as possible. This essay will discuss the main causes of crime and the possible measures to tackle those causes.
A growing number of crimes is attributable to several reasons. The first one is poverty. In many impoverished countries, for instance, numerous citizens are even incapable of making ends meet and in desperate need of basic living standards; as a consequence, people gradually have a tendency to commit burglary or robbery to make a living. In addition, social problems such as inequality could also lead to an increase in crime rate. For instance, the minority of communities, including people of low socioeconomic status or from disadvantaged backgrounds, are excluded and treated unfairly, which may initially whip those people into a frenzy and afterwards culminate in a series of their anti-social actions such as arson and vandalism.
On the other hand, it is essential to taking effective actions to reverse the situation. First of all, the government should provide those affected by poverty with more opportunities to find a decent job, as it can effectively alleviate poverty. For instance, the government can employ those unemployed people as blue collar workers such as cleaners. In addition, the government should eliminate social inequality through education. For instance, college curriculum should emphasize more on sociology and philosophy, which contributes to raising the awareness of the importance and benefits of social equality. Therefore, people from different backgrounds will be offered the same opportunity to compete in society.
In summary, the increasing number of crimes could be caused by a wide range of factors including poverty and social inequality. However, we share a common responsibility to make joint efforts to arrest the deterioration and encourage each individual to be a law-abiding citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1077857268 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.406300707 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160987977168 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494723222003 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059673100145 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940506530551 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298266215022 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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