In many countries children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
Involving children in paid work is a crime in many countries and there are stringent laws to counter the child labour problems. On the contrary, some people think that children should be involved in paid work as it gives an opportunity to learn skills and experience the world in realistic manner. I believe that children should focus on study and not be involved in long term paid work.
People who support the idea of engaging children in various works have some rationale. First of all, children get the chance to see the life more closely. Parents love their children and pamper at home so much that sometime kids do not realize the hardship of life. Consequently, children become diffident and struggle in later phases of life. Secondly, by getting involved in work, children get in & out of that trade and not only acquire the new skills but also understand that fringe elements of that trade such as working environment, career opportunities etc... For example, my niece love to make various items out of wood but when she was made to involve in carpentry work, she realized how labour intensive is the carpentry work.
However, when children are involved in work for earning their livelihood, so many problems occurs. To begin with, children are forced to leave the school and temporary hired by agency for doing routine job. It has been observed that children are paid very nominal amount and made to involve in dangerous job, resulting in, and sometime loss of life. For instance, large numbers of children in African countries are involved in mines and in case of any mishap; they are ones who suffer in-variably. Furthermore, children initially join the paid work for some money but gradually deviate from study and end up being dropped out from school. As a result, they do not become fully qualified and do not get good jobs.
To conclude, children should not be involved in paid work as it increases so many problems in the society. However, to expose the different work experiences, hand-on work experience should be incorporated in their curriculum.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93428571429 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57589879148 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537142857143 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7063616529 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.588235294 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1764705882 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268574265503 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10079166229 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604884865679 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187625444943 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278117155888 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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