In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
What are your opinions on this issue?
In many countries, children are employed in different types of paid work. It is difficult to say that, child labor is injustice or valuable for children. Where some people considered it a positive and others think it's wrong. In the following, I will discuss the real scenario of child labor and child experience.
Nowadays, children are taking part of much risk job which is not suitable for their age. Many industries take children as paid employee which is very hazardous for them. But every recent day they doing that type of industrial work. People take children as a helper and they give them lower money than other. Many children work in very high temperature and an unhealthy place for that reason they are getting sick of many unknown diseases.
On the on hand, children are the future of any country and they will introduce a new world. It's really unfortunate to hear that many developing countries where children are working as a part-time or full-time employee. They are taking responsibility for their family and sometimes they are the only one who can earn money. Many children who have no parents or relatives and they are bound to do work for his/her livelihoods.
Moreover, some parents are suggesting their children go to work and learn some new thing and gain experience in real life. They think it will help to exhibit their children capability they will figure out the real world. If children go to part-time work they also very helpful towards their parents. Some sort of experience may help children to build their future. That also make them feel independent and responsible about life.
In conclusion, I can say that children are the valuable asset of a country but when it comes about take own family liability then it is difficult to judge. Whereas children who are working for an experience they are doing the very good deed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, whereas, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89622641509 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52662144161 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503144654088 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4468300604 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.85 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271490061132 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971379094887 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611613106308 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168809086185 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537913805181 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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