Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Governments in all countries have some visions and responsibilities and they are sought to achieve the overall developments of the country for a prosperous future. Thus, many governments think that economic progress is the key to success while others disagree with this notion and opine that many other aspects such as green environment, security, social values, traditions and peace among nations are even more important. I personally believe that economic success of a nation is an important goal for a government but this is not the most important goal.
To start, many developed countries have already gained the economic progress and yet they are suffering from increased crime rates, hostile relationship with other nations, internal chaos, corruption and outbreak of epidemic diseases. Thus economic progress had failed to ensure better life standard of citizens and this is a proof that only economic progress should not be the vision of a government. On the contrary, without economic stability, a government cannot ensure development in education, defense, healthcare, international trade and safety of citizens.
Again, industrialization and success in trades have ensured economic stability to many western and Asian countries and yet the environmental damage that this progress has caused is overwhelming. What good money would bring to a nation if they cannot build a safe and green environment for the next generation? However, many people would also argue that it is better to leave a prosperous country to the new generation rather than leaving a broken economy.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that economic progress should be an important goal for a government but there are still many aspects which are equally important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...tion and outbreak of epidemic diseases. Thus economic progress had failed to ensure ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252491694352 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.129568106312 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.142857142857 0.0946595960268 151% => OK
Adverbs: 0.063122923588 0.0501214627716 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0166112956811 0.0437548338989 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102990033223 0.122226691241 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0265780730897 0.0403226058552 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98846328387 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0265780730897 0.0326793684256 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0996677740864 0.0861772015684 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0199335548173 0.021408717616 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00664451827243 0.011925033212 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1746.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 316.048096192 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.3956043956 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.424908424908 0.374742101984 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322344322344 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.245421245421 0.203846283523 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157509157509 0.137316102897 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98846328387 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.9884640198 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 27.3 20.7743622355 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9548566914 49.517814964 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.6 127.492653851 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7743622355 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.814263465372 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 59.5344322344 49.1944974215 121% => OK
Elegance: 1.8253968254 1.69124875643 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384739846909 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118161268416 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0541217804208 0.0668466124924 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.63853435783 0.534860350844 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136657422296 0.148594505496 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171623945336 0.134430193775 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108462686382 0.0742795772207 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.26099076934 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121714305846 0.0638462369009 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267670964294 0.228012699653 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102700796282 0.058150111329 177% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.