Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
For last two decades, parameters to measure the strength of country has changed and the only point which is taken into consideration is an economy of country. Almost every country is striving to be economically better than other by foreign direct investment, policy reform etc… On the other hand, some individuals believe that along with economy, other parameters are critical as well for making nation strong. I believe that aspiring to be drivers in business and trade is good sign but other parameters are also equally important.
People who believe government’s paramount goal is strengthen the economy have some valid points. First of all, strong business and financial position in turn better employment opportunities. It is generally considered that if business grows it generates employment and lots of people especially young people are benefited at most. In modern ear, particularly skilled people get hefty packages while supporting the technology driven business worldwide. For example, Indian IT professional are in high demand and support companies around the world. Secondly, fringe services are also demanded and help to increase per capita income which improves the condition of society all together.
However, other improvements in country can’t be neglected and have severe repercussion. In some country, social structure is in bad shape and until it is restructured, other improved parameter may not produce desired effects. For instance, in some Asian countries, women are suppressed badly and given second class citizen status which make them victim of rape, molestation and other exploitation. Pakistan’s recent journalist murder is horrible story and example of such cases.
To conclude, for improving the employment and infrastructure, economy has to be better and government must try to improve it but other progress such as health condition, reduce mortality rate etc. should not be neglected at all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'strengthened'.
Suggestion: strengthened
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56565656566 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99708315765 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649831649832 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.014856224 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.2 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135966011296 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404794484669 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351352898468 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816003454954 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221303943715 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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