Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
Dolphins are fascinating animals. They arent only intelligent but theyre also very f...
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Suggestion: they're
...nimals. They arent only intelligent but theyre also very friendly. Therefore, they can...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , .
...drowning people or perform in the circus,...Children and also their parents are ve...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Children
...ning people or perform in the circus,...Children and also their parents are very interes...
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Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...p through the hoops, and jump in the air,...But sometimes, they have an accident w...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...rough the hoops, and jump in the air,...But sometimes, they have an accident while ...
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Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... in the circus. Because these instances dont usually happen and we can surmount by m...
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Suggestion: I'm
...m well, protect and take care of them. Im Khanh.I study at Chu Van An high school...
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Suggestion: I
...rotect and take care of them. Im Khanh.I study at Chu Van An high school. My fam...
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Suggestion: My
...re my parents, my younger sister and me.My favorite subject is Math and Physics. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87830687831 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66261134493 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671957671958 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.2557773009 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201768606737 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787198837909 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874651499309 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651415103932 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811189950172 0.056905535591 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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