Nowadays, when you commit a crime, you go to prison. Many people are favor of this as they believe that they deserve to be imprisoned. some critics, however, say that there is an alternative of it for example they should do unpaid work that is beneficial for the community. I, in this essay, will weight on both of opinion before giving my own opinion.
On the one side, the people who are favor of imprisonment of crime believe that it is lucrative for both society and criminal as well. There are so many dangerous and violent criminals who put the society in precarious state like terrors, drugs dealers etc. and they deserve to be imprisoned with life sentences. Secondly, Prison, sometimes, gives offenders the chance to reflect on their actions and gives them time to reform their behaviors. But the same time, we cannot avert or ignore the disadvantages of it. Keep criminal in jail are very costly. it incurs massive government funding like recruitment of police officers, their hefty salaries, expense on loading and boarding of criminals etc. Not only that, prison records of lawbreaker make it difficult for him to get a job on release which can lead back into crime which is one of the major cons.
On the other side, by citing the above mentioned criticism, some people argue that the wrongdoers should indulge in work for society at free of cost which is beneficial not for community but also for offender. For example, the errant people like pickpocket, shoplifter who become frail and lethargic and by doing unpaid work instead of imprisonment learn something different, new and help to boost in self esteem and open a door with many opportunities.
In conclusion, at my opinion, second alternative is much effective in case of less serious crime and for another kind of actions they should have to pay for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84713375796 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6243197674 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2345660904 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.466666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369614259709 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108346880737 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111599890863 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226986357413 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124416952549 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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