Many people believe that in order to have clean and tidy streets in their neighborhood, this should be the residents’ responsibility, while others think it should be the government’s duty. What is your opinion?
The responsibility taken to maintain a clean and tidy street is a hotly-debated issue that often divides opinion. Some would argue that it is the duty of the government, while others cite that it is the responsibility of a citizen. Although governments collect taxes from people to remove garbage from the streets, I believe that people should be self-responsible and keep their city clean.
On the one hand, people are paying a hefty amount to the government in the form of taxes. In many countries, these taxes include environment tax also, which means it is the responsibility of the authorities to support a clean and green environment. For example, in India, there is a special cess of 2.5% on all consumables for preserving the environment clean, which is referred to as “Swatcha Bharath Tax”. However, this trend will not help unless and until people join their hands together with the government.
On the other hand, people should take initiation to keep their surroundings clean. They cannot just throw up their hands by paying taxes and blame the government for not keeping the city clean, moreover, they should voluntarily come up with some innovative ideas to make the streets of the neighborhood more beautiful. To illustrate, in Bangalore, many IT employees have joined as volunteers to clean the street of a huge market. I believe that this approach of taking initiation helps to keep up the city clean
To conclude, Even though the governments are doing their job to maintain the streets dirt free, I think it is mainly the responsibility of an Individual to keep his surroundings hygiene.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07089552239 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03149310314 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541044776119 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7241946209 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.545454545 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31997151458 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113952522546 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546257023211 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172139161334 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637948721333 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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