The money spent by governments on space programs would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, technology has dominated almost all aspects of human's lives and among all these developments space programs had an enormous quote of governments' money and they are grouped as expensive research programs. It is believed by a group of people that it would be better to spend this amount of money on public services such as schools and hospitals. I believe advantages of spending money on public programs by far outweigh the disadvantages and this will be discussed.
Spending money on public services should bring lots of profits for the residents of an area. Firstly, accessing to schools that are very well equipped with educational facilities such as labs, sport facilities and the like is indispensable for the young generations who will be the future authorities of the world. Besides, all people should access free and appropriate health services and government authorities should provide people with this social welfare. Moreover, space programs are very expensive, time consuming and they do not directly benefit most people.
On the other hand, the importance of space programs should not be neglected since it would open doors to better achievements about space and cosmos; furthermore, it is quite feasible for people to form a colony on other planets in the near future. In addition, through these researches scientists can acquire information about the probability of finding water or oxygen on other planets which can be beneficial.
To sum up, although all the residents of the world are entitled to access a decent education and healthcare service, government should devote some amount of money to do researches in different fields. Consequently, fellows will be satisfy with the result of the science investigations and meanwhile they will enjoy the social services they receive.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34146341463 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87467637835 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4164100314 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.363636364 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254796241945 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10255320726 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774486998266 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150593033279 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705054760185 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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