News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Nowadays, the news and media industry have expanded to great extent. They are reporting on each and every aspect of social, political and international issues. With the passage of time, it becomes a heated debate that what should newspaper and television news channel broadcast and published on their newspaper? Which news should they give preference good or bad?
The newspaper and television channels are doing great job for the betterment of society. Both have brought immense advantages to people’ life in term of health, education and other services, because they point out the main issues in their headlines and so that authorities can take action and resolve that particular issue. Further they keep their eyes on government officials where they doing corruption and taking graft from companies in order to pass the project tenders. They also highlight criminal activities like robberies and ransom.
Moreover, in these days newspaper and television editors facing enormous pressure from higher government officials on, what they are broadcasting. Firstly, government officials are usually against in developing countries because these news channels always reports their bad governance and highlight why they are not delivering to the people. Further some reality show which imitates the criminal also concerns for parents, because after watching these show children could have worst image of their society and culture.
But, it is often argued that news channels always broadcast bad news, they should more focus more good news like sports, culture and events. This news could develop the better prospective of young one and adults about their society, also publishing about criminal activities influence jobless adults to imitate those activities.
To sum up, it’s my personal opinion that new editors should continue their jobs for the betterment of society without any kind of influence, but it would be better if they highlight and focus more on positive news than bad news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48709677419 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56523828339 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590322580645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0926719446 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281459713074 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997435701175 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779843608226 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168670500135 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688925928102 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.