Nowadays many parents believe that children’s usage of tablets or computers would be good for their future academic career. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such belief? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you
Comparing present with the past children are addicted to computers and tablets. Even their whole world evolve around these technologies. There certainly are some great benefits of using these technologies but the drawback side must not be ignored.
For a start, children's whole world is trapped in the computer from education to entertainment purpose. Inclination of children attention towards these machines have some great advantages. The present era that is completely surrounded by the IT, It seems as we are living machines lives. Having look around either in schools or amusement area computers have been installed. For example, from a very young age, education institutions provide practical experience to the young adults to operate computer systems. Not just limited to educational institutions but other benefits are using the internet on the computers and tablets for any untraceable information. Also, the intellectual skills are greatly enhanced by using the multiple and latest technology machines. Therefore, parents believe on using these machines would give a support to enhance future career to their children is absolutely unarguable.
On the other hand, the disadvantages should also not be overlooked. For instance, physical health is very much affected by using too much computers or tablets it may cause serious impact on eyes. Even not just physical health but too much involvement of children in these machines are making them more vulnerable in sense of manual working. These children are very much dependable on these machines that they sometimes ignore the importance of manual working. For instance, appearing in exams, the children find themselves in a difficult position to write in the exams though they are well prepared. This habit make it even more worse when it comes to practical life as at work they might need to do some manual working at that point they find it more difficult to adjust themselves in such situation.
It is believed by the parents that children should have a strong command on computer skills. As this will lead them to get success in their lives and achieve their goals. However, bad impacts should also be considered by the parents and therefore, must keep a balance on both sides
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...alth is very much affected by using too much computers or tablets it may cause serio...
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Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
... well prepared. This habit make it even more worse when it comes to practical life as at w...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...efore, must keep a balance on both sides
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24722222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75506127959 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530555555556 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4069977699 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.45 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205895281325 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635313331095 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542205396129 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118968065335 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514760914326 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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