Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Media is one of the sources of information to know about the current affairs around the world. In recent days, people think that the media network is only showing the effects and problems that are faced by people instead of showing the developments taking place in the nation. Few masses are with the perception that, the telecasting of urgencies and problems is too harmful for the individuals as this brings stress on pupil and society. I partially agree to this argument and I explain my reasons in the following passage.
On the one hand, I believe that media is acts as a source to reach the citizens. By telecasting the scenarios of society people get to know about the problems they may face in society. Additionally, it has benefits to telecast about issues and crisis to alert people to be aware of those conditions. For example, if this mechanism reflects on an issue related to kidnaps happening in the city, it means that people will take more precautions while they go out with their family or when they send their children to schools. In contrast, focusing on emergencies doesn't mean that it is showing to make masses to get tensed. At the same time, it is waste of time to think that it affects people and nation because, the intension of it is to communicate with the citizens about the present situations.
On the other hand, media should also telecast about various implementations being done in the country. Firstly, if there is any issue related to health issues that is worrying the society then the authorities will urge to take special precautions and introduce different medication to help the people. Such things must be elevated to the individuals through news and different programs which will help the nation.
To recapitulate, there is no need to worry by seeing what the media spreads because it helps the nation by making people to know about current position in the community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'kidnap'.
Suggestion: kidnap
...chanism reflects on an issue related to kidnaps happening in the city, it means that pe...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s. In contrast, focusing on emergencies doesnt mean that it is showing to make masses ...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
... society then the authorities will urge to take special precautions and introduce diffe...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt programs which will help the nation. To recapitulate, there is no need to wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, while, for example, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85975609756 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64936743935 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52743902439 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4074524136 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.857142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177494468538 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058459841788 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394752304594 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108004518016 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448393537533 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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