In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Essay topics:

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

No doubt,traffic problem increasing day by day. one possible solution of this problem government should impose heavy taxes on private transport.private transport such as cars,motorcycle and other vehicle are increased in my country.Before giving any point of view let us discuss about this topic in the following paragraph.

There are number of reason, first benefit of such a measures is that the heavy taxes would discourage car owner from using their car because it is very expensive to drive as well as private transport are decreased then reducing traffic problem and pollution also.public transport in the cities is very poor. for example people can see old buses and trains are generate not good on this heavy taxes impose.

On the other hand,Some people are not able to pay taxes because they have not a good jobs and they have sufficient money for their families so that they do not pay tax to government. This would mean that it would hit those with less money harder, whilst the rich could likely afford it. It is therefore not a fair tax.

To conclude, this solution is worth considering to improve the current situation, but there are advantages and disadvantages of introducing such a policy.

Votes
Average: 5 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.168181818182 0.155533422707 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.118181818182 0.0946595960268 125% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0545454545455 0.0501214627716 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.05 0.0437548338989 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113636363636 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0363636363636 0.0403226058552 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85255068101 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0227272727273 0.0326793684256 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0863636363636 0.0861772015684 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0272727272727 0.021408717616 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1213.0 1933.35771543 63% => OK
No of words: 202.0 316.048096192 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00495049505 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20517956788 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311881188119 0.374742101984 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257425742574 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168316831683 0.203846283523 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133663366337 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85255068101 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.037074148 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 62.3167844975 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0891783567 50% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 25.25 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.3172008437 49.517814964 190% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.625 127.492653851 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 0.814263465372 184% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.99599198397 300% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.9925742574 49.1944974215 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.46666666667 1.69124875643 87% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348552403941 0.332605444948 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120763274254 0.102741220458 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0889017565384 0.0668466124924 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.628907803641 0.534860350844 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.245233338192 0.148594505496 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140338892315 0.134430193775 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108724433618 0.0742795772207 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.204100980965 0.324371583561 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0636672463226 0.0638462369009 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231736765214 0.228012699653 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07557707283 0.058150111329 130% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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