People should work a fixed number of hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
I agree with the statement that working hours should be fixed per week and an employee should not be asked to do any more work than these fixed hours. Work-life balance is required in life of each individual. Working hours are stipulated so that personnel works for those stipulated hours each week and manage their family and other priorities accordingly.
Working hours of 9 to 5 and five days a week are set after thorough research. These are optimum number of hours that an individual can work efficiently and effectively during a week. Human body requires rest and person also have to take care of other priorities like family, kids as well as need to maintain a social life as well. Having a set number of hours per week would enable a him/her to maintain a daily routine and plan their work and other needs accordingly.
Now developed nations are also emphasizing on following fixed number of hours for employees. Recently few of the developed countries have passed a law that no employer is allowed to ask their staff to work overtime. Germany has also implemented that Boss cannot even call his/her subordinate worker after working hours or on weekends. World too is now focusing on having fixed number of hours.
I would like to elaborate through my own example. I have fixed number of hours per week i.e. 40 hours. However, in past, due to influx of new projects, my employer used to ask me and my team to work overtime to finish the projects. I had noticed that working extended hours deteriorated performance of my subordinates as well as they started making up excuses to take days off or some started coming to office late in the morning with excuses that they were not be able to wake up in the morning as they were working late. On fixing working hours, this problem vanished.
I would thus conclude through my experience & global research that there should be fixed working hours for employees and they should not be bothered outside of their work timings. This will not only make them punctual, but will also increase their performance on job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76666666667 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52043466691 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522222222222 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2610398588 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301799920396 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1070651857 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738127497005 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182668194852 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607182937084 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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