People visiting other countries should adapt to the customs and behaviors expected there. They should not expect the host country to welcome different customs and behaviors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
To a certain extent I agree that visitors to other countries should adapt the customs and traditions of the host country; however, I also think that the host countries should accept the visitors' cultural differences. This will be discussed in this essay.
Nowadays, the number of people who travel to other countries with the aim of fulfilling the business missions, taking a holiday and the like is on the increase. In a big number of host countries the customs, traditions and social behaviors are totally different and it is wise for the visitors to adapt themselves to the culture and rules of the host country. Take Iran for example, a country with especial dress code and strict rules about consuming alcoholic drinks. A visitor is expected to be aware of the conditions and respect the rules to be welcomed.
On the other hand, some travellers do not have enough information about the customs and behaviors of the host country in details which seems natural. The government authorities should be aware of this issue and underestimate some severe rules for tourists and visitors. Consequently, the globetrotters and tourists would enjoy their trip and it makes a good memory in their mind. Besides, it can be an effective, powerful and positive propaganda for the host country to attract more visitors.
To sum up, it is true that each country has its own traditions, rules and behaviors; they should accept the visitors' cultural differences and be hospitable to expand the tourist industry in their country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, so, for example, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06349206349 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77173946873 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2221890081 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316689649203 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108513116951 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989282583989 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195252296228 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610342880346 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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