"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
“Prevention is better than cure”. In the health budget proposed by the government, the major amount should be spending on Health education and preventive measures rather than treatment only. This essay will discuss the above statement and gives a clear opinion.
Spending big sum of a budget on Health education and preventive measures is very important than using that amount for treatment purpose. If Government installs traffic signals in city junctions, the rate of accidents would decrease. This is much better than paying hospital bills for the patients affected by the incident. Secondly, the government can save the lives of many people by promoting safety measures. For example, if authority promotes television advertisements of wearing helmets while riding on a motorcycle and keeping seatbelt while driving cars which in case neglected may lead to heinous accidents, our nation will be free from accidental deaths. Finally, supplying the antibiotic medicines prior to the issue takes place better than providing treatment after the cause. For instance, giving injections and tablets to citizens for deadly diseases like swine flu before it attacks is much advantageous than treating the victims after the attack.
On the other hand, spending a lump sum amount upon health education and preventive measures may not be that much effective why because some people may not follow the rules implemented by the Government. For example, the Government promotes TV ads about maintaining cleanliness at home but some people do not obey that.
This essay discussed both perspectives. But I strongly believe that spending a large amount of budget on safety precautions and health education is far more important than using only for treatment purpose as they will help the citizens to fight with the problem in advance and save their lives
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39862542955 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78924358637 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4921738528 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278950847596 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958487845164 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09064719832 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189238200439 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917260150218 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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