In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In today's modern world, it is very intricate to sustain without doing hard work. In most of the countries, it is quite difficult to get a good job unless one is highly qualified. This scenario has lead to a feeling of insecurity among the youth. They are frightened to not been able to fulfill their dreams and their parent's aspirations.

Foremost, competition has been increasing incessantly which has made the young people miserable. Although, there are many more reasons such as the desire to prove themselves and to become financially independent. Young people especially, boys want to achieve their goals in life swiftly so they do not have to look upon their parents for their needs. In order, to do so, they tend to devote more time to studies or vocation instead of having fun with their friends and family.

These people are aware of the fact that nowadays, only a person who is successful and wealthy is respected. Conversely, to a man who has not been able to attain anything as he is neither recognized nor honoured in the society. Therefore, it has become essential for today's generation to work diligently and to concentrate more on building their future rather than to relish with their loved ones in going out for a vacation or movie etc.

To recapitulate, I admit, it is vital to focus on education and career but at the same time it is unwise to ignore the significance of relaxation especially at young age because there are several activities that can be done only at this age. I have seen many old people repenting that they did not enjoy when they were young as they were busy earning money. Additionally, relaxation is important to work efficiently, indeed, it not only energizes your brain but it also rejuvenates you. Hence, one must manage our schedule in such away that we always have some spare time to get indulge in our favourite past time.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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...re time to get indulge in our favourite past time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, if, look, so, therefore, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77300613497 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67012866971 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598159509202 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4789088595 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.733333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20741387865 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583788902477 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402055587671 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111653088706 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040645790386 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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