Some Governments say how many children a family can have in their country should be strictly controlled. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. Is It sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way?
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer.
Many governments debate on how may off springs a family can have in their country to control the number of populations. Some opinion says that to control the number of population, applying taxes is the solution.
Applying taxes to the over number of children is a good idea to control the population size of a country rather than killing them. The government should tell its people that the maximum number of off spring they can have is 3 only and the succeeding off spring has a tax already so that people will start to avoid to have so many children in a family. Government could also have a campaign about the family planning to lessen the rapid rising of the population. Family planning is about preventing a family to have too much children. To prevent it, husband and wife could use a protection or the wife could have a shot to prevent exceeding the maximum number of children.
It is right and just that the government control the population so that people and its individual needs is equal. Furthermore, it is a great help for the country to stay stable in financial because the people can consume the products their country's producing. Unlike the countries who have a lot of people, they need to borrow in other countries to satisfied the needs of their people.
In this essay, my opinion is somewhat agree and disagree. I agree for the tax that will be added for the exceeding child for the families who is in the middle and lower class because it is for their own good. The smaller the family, the more they can support all their kids. Sadly, if you have bigger family but lower income, you cannot support all of your children. So then, I disagree for the higher class to have taxes for the exceeding child because even though the number of their children is over than the maximum, they can afford to support all their children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid having'.
Suggestion: avoid having
...ax already so that people will start to avoid to have so many children in a family. Governmen...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...s about preventing a family to have too much children. To prevent it, husband and wi...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lation so that people and its individual needs is equal. Furthermore, it is a gre...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... In this essay, my opinion is somewhat agree and disagree. I agree for the tax that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60606060606 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42268131554 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445454545455 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3738661827 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439549631937 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147350028496 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864541045005 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279517308553 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794203068985 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.