Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
The parenthood is the most splendid feeling throughout the world. Therefore, the parental instinct is inevitably lead parents to purchase a great number of playthings. In fact, the benefits seem the most apparent, but surprisingly there could be drawbacks as well.
One of the prominent features is enjoying childhood. When either a boy or a girl has a new toy, it makes them very happy because children care about playing with their toys. By playing with smart games such as puzzles and thinking games, the brain development will be stimulated. For example, modern toys are designed to be not only educational but also fun. Accordingly, if parents buy these types of playthings, their children acquire intellectual mind as well as creativity. As a result, picking up the toys which enhance children’s recognition have significant advantages.
Although owing a lot of playthings is useful for either boys or girls, it possibly detriment them in some hidden ways. Interestingly, it contributes to spoil children as they used to have more toys than necessary which have adverse effects on their character. Moreover, their concentration span may suffer as they become unable to focus on one game for a decent length of time. For instance, while they are playing with one toy, their focus might be distrusted due to the pile of playthings which are tempting.
In conclusion, toys play an important role in helping children’s growth as they become smarter and happy. However, at the time, disadvantages come along with the benefits of owing a lot of toys since their attention may be lost instantly. Consequently, parents should choose not only the right toys but also a reasonable number of toys.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'leaded', 'led'.
Suggestion: leaded; led
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1654676259 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98094460595 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3412189056 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.75 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0625 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276739504205 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826668919978 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490571456349 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158228370815 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571274865725 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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