Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think that success is much related to mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Fitness is a vital factor that involves all sports. Some people cite that physical fitness is significant than mental attitude, while others opine the other way. In this essay, I will discuss both views. In my opinion - for a sportsperson or a sports team, they should be mentally fit than physically.
It is an irrefutable fact that physical fitness is a prominent aspect of sports, without this they cannot excel in the game. Especially some sports involves massive bodily movements such as Rugby, Football, Cricket, Wrestling and so on. This is the reason why the coaches involve them in massive workout programs. It is often seen in international football competitions the players often have a physic body so that they are flexible to run swiftly and stretch. In short, physical fitness has a significant role in sports
On the contrary, it is the mental fitness and attitude of the player that leads to winning the game. Even though people are physically fit but are not confident enough to play the game, the results will be negative. For example in recent cricket world cup, the team which has no experience in international cricket had entered into semi-finals by defeating world number one ranked team by having a positive and mental attitude towards the game. Additionally, even though Sachin Tendulkar is only 5.9 foot tall and criticized by many of the international players ruled the world of cricket and became the god of gentleman game because of his mental attitude towards his game.
In conclusion, success and failure of the game depend on various aspects. Although, some people say that physical fitness is the paramount factor, in my view winning the game is dependent on the mental attitude of the team.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99310344828 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6783364946 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562068965517 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4356125866 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154866162235 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059950881195 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564690547376 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113946630711 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759317906858 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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