Some people argue that hard work and determination are the most important factors in success, others see that there are other factors that are more significant. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Being successful is a great feeling and to be successful one should not only have the capability of doing hard work but also commitment towards work. While some assert that these two variables play an increasingly more central role in the sphere of success, others cite that there are other factors which play more imperative than these. I strongly believe in diligence and determination will make a person successful.
Diligence and commitment towards the work is the highway for success, both of these are imperative foundation of any task. To complete a task successfully, one should have patience which is a by-product of determination and hard-work. There are many people who are successful by trusting these two aspects, AR Rehaman, without hard-work and determination he is none other than a normal human, he believed in those things and won two Oscar awards. Therefore, it is obvious that to be one who invests in hard-work and determination will have success.
Sometimes, one should have luck to be successfully, it also plays a role in success, especially when you are working with time. Many inventions by various renowned scientists are invented by accidents and those are called lucky inventions. It can be exemplified by discovery of penicillin, which was invented by Alexander Fleming by an accident, and the displacement factor of Archimedes was also invented by a lucky accident in a bath tub. Hence in sort luck is one of the factors that could lead towards success.
One cannot depend on luck itself, one who does hard-work with commitment will always reach goal with satisfaction of his name on success board. No I don’t agree that other factors will help in a man’s success, and will not play a competitive role on par with determination and hard-work
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06101694915 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96857040121 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518644067797 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7436527436 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261333447753 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098993418265 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604724244051 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173972759958 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616194028346 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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