Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
These days’ parents want kid's fun time activity to be more educational than rather a waste of the crucial time of young children. My two cents go for full use of children's time in their early learning age with more educative activities. In the following paragraphs, we have examined whether a child's leisure time should be spent in a more structured approach or otherwise.
According to me, structured learning provides a child more opportunity to learn to new things in a methodical way. For example, toddlers don’t have a good grasp to hold a pencil and hence a task based activity to sort out marbles would help them to focus and learn to hold objects. Furthermore, if parents include swimming in their child’s free time. The child can learn a learn a life skill of survival and get a good exercise. As per many empirical evidences, children have a massive ability to learn things quickly till 6 years of age. Many sports players start their training at tender age of 4 years.
On the other hand, unstructured learning harnesses little one’s imaginative cognitive ability and social interaction skills. By playing with doll house, a small girl can learn how to develop communication and behavioural skills, which may be fundamental for growth of some kids but not all. These skills are also learnt at home observing relationships between different family members. Also, there are instances, during the free play, kids become arrogant and are difficult to be managed by parents. This can lead to stress and strained relationship between parents and children.
Hence, it is important to plan small children’s playtime with loads of learning activities, which will be useful for them in future years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Message: Consider replacing "in a methodical way" with adverb for "methodical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...more opportunity to learn to new things in a methodical way. For example, toddlers don't have ...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'learn a'.
Suggestion: learn a
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10211267606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86290559168 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644366197183 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4385467575 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118017673752 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409823883964 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462305428096 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791003568799 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565259075633 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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